Writing plan



Main Idea:

How the setting influences the jockey’s (Bitsy Barlow’s) character in the novella.

First major point:

The three men and the jockey’s mood and how the pleasures of the three men influenced the jockey.


Second major point:

How the jockey was passing his time and he always thought about his friend. jockey was quiet and alone.


Third major point:

Crowded of the dining room and the people were sitting and enjoying with their friends that influences the jockey

Conclusion:






Friday, May 16, 2008

I will write about, how the setting influences the jockey’s character in the novella. The jockey’s name was Bitsy Barlow. He his dwarfed body grew rigid, his hands stiffened so that the fingers curled inward like gray day.

Jockey had ridden that afternoon, when he came in the dining room the three men were sitting. The rich man who was the owner of the horse, Sylvester was the trainer and the bookie was Simmons. They were eating a dinner and drinking the whiskey. They enjoyed with each other with out of thinking to the mood of the jockey’s (Bitsy Barlow’s.) When Bitsy saw the three men mirthfulness and their pleasures, the jockey’s mood changed and he became more sad and anguished.

The jockey, his character changed during the last six months because his particular friend (the Irish kid) got hurt on the track and broke a leg and a hip. Before the accident, jockey and his friend always were playing rummy and reading the sports page together. Now, he is alone and he missed his lovely friend. He passes his time alone and he does not have a friend to pass time with his or her. He does not do the interesting thing for enjoying and he always sad.

The dining room was crowded because of the racing season. Most hotels in the towns were full. The dining room where decorates by bouquets of august roses. All the tables in the dining room occupied and cause of a lot of adjoining, bar became a warm. The busy place like that, for sure influences the jockey character. When he was coming in the dining room and seeing the people were enjoying with each other’s but he was lonely because his particular friend was not there.

When the jockey saw the three men were eating, drinking and they were an excellent mood with out of thinking the jockey’s sadness. That influences the jockey’s character and he misses his friend. All the time, he things about his friend and he passed his time on dyspeptic. The crowded place influences the jockey’s character too, because when he saw a lot of adjoining set together and he is alone on that influence him.